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From the moment I saw her
I knew it a must
I just need to have her
I must feed my lust

That look in her eye
The shape of her bust
Her full figured lips
Pressed on me a must

Her panties of satin
Outlined in lace
O to press my face on them
And feel her embrace

Her flawless form
As if created by saints
Hit with an airbrush
And magical paints

The way that she moves
With such cat like grace
The locker room light
How it falls on her face

An angel in motion
So poetically timed
An ageless beauty
On top of her prime

O what I would give
For one day in time
To hold such a beauty
Our bodies entwined

She never noticed
My fixated gaze
But the way she affects me
Puts me in a daze
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another poem to FLM

by mac3
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:iconmac3:
Thank you very much, all about dreams and desires.
Unlike green eggs and ham by far :)
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:iconsaedarknyghtmoon:
Personally I liked it. It had the lead up notion of wanting and then the shivering let down. Its wonderful, I loved it. Keep it up.
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:iconmac3:
Well sorry you did not like it, and if that image in you avatar is you, looks like you are not old enough for the erotic stuff and may want to stick with Cat in the hat for now :)
Wish I heard nursery rhymes like this growing up :).
Sorry, I'm not being rude, still waking up after a long night :)

Again sorry you did not like it :(
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:iconjinuzinha:
i love the image :clap:
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:icondiamondie:
~diamondie Mar 28, 2004  Professional Writer
I think rhyming and the short lines make this sound a bit like a nursery rhyme, which is not something I associate with erotic poetry. It seems too ordinary to me, not exactly clichéd, but lacking originality with the imagery.
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